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This source excerpt begins near Headline strategy taxonomy and preserves the surrounding evidence from 2IA.org/agent-file-handoff/Archive/2026-05-18-top-navigation-density-public-copy/Improvement/Improving Top-of-Page Header Copy and Presentation for 2IA.md.

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| Page type | Current header snapshot | Likely audience and context | Current CTA state | What to change first | Source |
|---|---|---|---|---|---|
| Home | Eyebrow identifies topic; H1 is brand name; subhead clearly frames the problem; two linked CTAs plus additional plain text action cues | First-time visitors, privacy/civil-liberties readers, researchers, journalists | Present, but emphasis is split across multiple prompts | Promote the value proposition to the H1, keep one dominant primary CTA, simplify the supporting action row | citeturn21view0 |
| Section landing | **Start Here** with explanatory paragraph about using 2IA “as a lawful public-intelligence operating system” | Users who want orientation and a first task | No strong above-the-fold CTA beyond the page itself | Keep “Start Here” as a label, but replace the hero H1 with a clearer standalone promise | citeturn21view1turn25view2 |
| Section landing | **Research Archive** with paragraph describing hubs, dossiers, investigations, toolkits, and correction paths | Users trying to understand content structure or browse evidence | No clear above-the-fold task CTA | Turn the header into a task frame such as “Browse the archive by issue, evidence, or action” | citeturn21view2turn25view2 |
| Article or dossier | Detailed explanatory title such as **Why Civil Liberties Need Public Intelligence** followed by a clear but dense standfirst | Readers arriving from links, search, or social | Limited obvious onward navigation at the top | Add a small “What you’ll get” or “Next step” micro-block near the standfirst | citeturn7view0 |
| Product or service analogue | **Support 2IA** with “Keep the work alive” and a paragraph about what support funds | Readers who are already persuaded or donation-curious | Top area does not surface a single obvious donate/subscribe/volunteer action in the parsed view | Put a direct primary donate/support CTA in the hero, with secondary links for subscribe or volunteer | citeturn21view4 |
| Contact | **Contact** under the eyebrow “Ordinary contact only,” followed by safety limitations | Corrections, tips, collaborators, general inquiries | Functional intent is clear, but positive usefulness is subordinate to warnings | Lead with what contact is for; keep “not a secure drop” as supporting safety microcopy | citeturn21view6 |

A useful shorthand diagnosis is this: **the homepage is benefit-led, but most interior headers are label-led**. That is precisely the pattern to reverse. The label can stay, but it should stop carrying the full burden of explanation. citeturn21view0turn21view1turn21view2turn21view3turn21view4turn21view6turn25view2

## Headline strategy taxonomy

NN/g’s microcopy research is especially relevant here. Short copy is read more often than long copy and supports scanning behavior; headings, titles, subheads, and CTAs need a clear goal. Informational microcopy should be clear, concise, and have character. In practical terms, that means the top line on 2IA pages should stop behaving like a slogan and start behaving like **useful microcontent**. citeturn26view1turn26view0

### Decision logic for choosing a headline strategy

' ' ' mermaid
flowchart TD
    A[What must this page do first?] --> B{Explain the site or section?}
    B -->|Yes| C[Use descriptive or benefit-led headline]
    B -->|No| D{Drive an immediate action?}
    D -->|Yes| E[Use action-oriented headline with a specific CTA]
    D -->|No| F{Build trust or credibility?}
    F -->|Yes| G[Use descriptive headline plus social proof or method cue]
    F -->|No| H{Need to spark curiosity?}
    H -->|Yes| I[Use curiosity headline plus an explanatory subhead]
    H -->|No| J[Use minimalist headline with strong subhead]
    C --> K[Add one-sentence deck and one primary next step]
    E --> K
    G --> K
    I --> K
    J --> K
' ' ' 

The logic above follows the underlying research pattern: users scan headings first, meaningful subheadings help them decide where to focus, and pages perform best when the top area tells them what the page is about and what they can do next. citeturn26view2turn26view3turn25view1turn29view0

### Strategy categories with tailored examples

| Strategy | What it does | Best fit on 2IA | Tailored example | Watch-out |
|---|---|---|---|---|
| Benefit-led | Leads with the outcome for the visitor | Homepage, Start Here, Support | **See the records behind surveillance decisions** | Can become generic if the benefit is too broad |
| Curiosity | Opens a question gap that the subhead resolves | Campaign pages, featured investigation blocks | **Who bought the system before the public heard about it?** | Never leave it unexplained; pair with a concrete deck |
| Social proof | Signals credibility or impact | Support, About, newsletter, featured research | **Used by readers who need receipts, not rhetoric** | Only use real proof, real counts, or real endorsements |
| Action-oriented | Tells the user what to do now | Start Here, templates, tool pages, Contact | **Pick one local machine and put it on the record** | Can sound bossy if not matched to user readiness |
| Descriptive | States exactly what the site or page is | Home, About, Methodology, archive hubs | **Independent public-intelligence research on surveillance and civil liberties** | Can feel flat without a sharper subhead |
| Microcopy-led | Uses compact supporting lines for trust, safety, or instructions | Contact, tools, support, interactive widgets | **No account required** / **Not a secure drop** | Should support the main header, not replace it |
| Personalization | Frames the header around user role or task | Start Here, issue hubs, contact routing | **Working on a records fight? Start here** | Avoid fake personalization or over-segmentation |

For 2IA specifically, the strongest pattern is usually **descriptive + benefit-led**, with **action-oriented** CTAs and **microcopy-led** trust notes. Curiosity can work, but only if it resolves into something concrete. That matters because NN/g explicitly warns against homepage/tagline language that sounds polished but fails to communicate anything distinct. citeturn25view0turn25view1turn26view1

## Recommended copy set

The copy below is intentionally **concise, stand-alone, and page-purpose-driven**. It is designed to avoid empty slogans, support scan behavior, and give 2IA a reusable but non-repetitive top-of-page system. Use the tone labels as guidance, not as rigid categories.

### Hero headline variants

| Variant | Tone | Best use |
|---|---|---|
| Public records for understanding surveillance power | Formal | Homepage, About |
| Investigate the systems making quiet decisions about people | Formal | Homepage, section landings |
| See the paperwork behind surveillance, scoring, and control | Formal | Homepage, archive hub |
| Want to know who bought the system? | Friendly | Homepage, Start Here |
| Follow the paper trail behind the tech | Friendly | Homepage, archive |
| Make hidden systems easier to check | Friendly | Start Here |
| Inspect the systems that inspect people | Bold | Homepage |
| Pull the record. Check the power. | Bold | Homepage, campaigns |
| Privacy harm leaves paperwork | Bold | Homepage, issue hub |
| Make power legible | Minimalist | Homepage, About |
| Follow the record | Minimalist | Homepage, archive |
| Check the system | Minimalist | Homepage, hero utility block |

### Section-header variants

| Variant | Tone | Best use |
|---|---|---|
| Start with one concrete system | Formal | Start Here |
| Browse the archive by issue, evidence, or action | Formal | Research Archive |
| How we verify what we publish | Formal | Methodology |
| Records worth pulling | Formal | Toolkit sections |
| What this page helps you do | Friendly | Section landings |
| Where the paper trail starts | Friendly | Guides, archive entry |
| Read the dossiers | Bold | Archive or featured block |
| Challenge the claim | Bold | Investigations, critique pages |
| What to do next | Minimalist | Article transitions |
| Why this matters locally | Minimalist | Civic action pages |

### Microcopy variants

| Variant | Tone | Best use |
|---|---|---|
| Independent, evidence-led research | Formal | Sitewide utility line |
| Lawful. Checkable. Public-interest. | Formal | Hero support note |
| No account required | Friendly | Tools, widgets |
| Not a secure drop | Friendly | Contact and intake |
| Read before you share | Bold | Social/share context |
| Evidence before heat | Bold | Investigations, editor’s note |
| One clear next step | Minimalist | CTA helper text |
| Use the official records channel | Minimalist | Contact, templates |